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(Note, both Ash and Misty are 18 now.)
We find Ash Ketchum on his way from Vermillion City to Cerulean City.  He has recently finished the Sinnoh League, the last league in the Pokémon World.  As he walks towards Cerulean, he finds a Thunderstone on the ground and decides to sell if for some good money.  Pocketing it, he continues on.  Ash arrived in Cerulean approximately one week and three days after leaving Vermillion City.  He was strongly anticipating seeing Misty, so he made a beeline for the Gym.
Ash opened the glass doors and entered the Gym to find that it was empty.  He stepped out into the main auditorium and looked around.  For a split second he thought no one was there, but then Misty glomped him from behind.  "Misty!" Ash said, happily surprised.  "That's me!" Misty said, hugging him.  Ash chuckled and wrapped his arms around her in a hug.  "I've missed you Mist, how've you been?" he asked.  "Fine, but it's really nice seeing you again!" Misty said smiling.
After they hugged for a minute, they separated and Misty asked "So what've you been up to?"  "Well, I finished Sinnoh, and I found this Thunderstone on the way here." Ash said, showing Misty the stone.  "Cool, we should be able to get some good money for that, considering Pikachu won't use it." Misty said.  Ash nodded and said "That's what I intended to do."  "There's a jeweler down the street, come on." Misty said.  She and Ash walked out the door.
They headed down the street and entered the jewelry store.  They walked up to the counter and asked the attendant how much the store would pay for the Thunderstone.  Seeing Ash's Pikachu, the attendant said "Well we'd pay 15000 Poké for it, but wouldn't you rather use it on your Pikachu?"  Ash shook his head.  "Pikachu doesn't want to evolve." he said.  The attendant shook his head and said "Sounds like a foolish decision if you ask me…"
The remark angered Pikachu to no end, and he Thunderbolted the young attendant.  Instinctively, the young man held up a mirror to protect himself.  The Thunderbolt bounced off the mirror and hit Ash and Misty.  Ash was still holding the Thunderstone, and Misty had been holding his hand.  The two felt awkward energy flowing through them, and suddenly the attendant got a really stunned look on his face.  As he began to shrink, Ash screamed "WHAT'S HAPPENING?!"
A short minute of transformation later, there were two familiar looking Raichus, a Pikachu, and two piles of clothing on the jewelry store floor.  "You two are Raichus?!" the attendant exclaimed.  "HOW THE HELL DID THIS HAPPEN?!?!" Misty screamed.  "I think the Thunderstone reacted to Pikachu's Thunderbolt…" Ash said.  The attendant understood them perfectly, as they spoke English.  He took the stone, handed them 15000 Poke, and said "Get out of here before I decide to catch you!" in an urgent voice.
Ash and Misty, now Raichus, and Pikachu ran out of the store and immediately headed for Pallet Town.  They managed to avoid trainers and reach Pallet Town in three weeks.  By the time they arrived, Ash's mom was frantic at not hearing from him in so long.  When she answered a knock on her door and found him sitting there in a Raichu body, she fainted.  "Great… I'll get the Professor…" Misty said.  She ran off while Ash and Pikachu dragged Delia inside.
Misty returned a few minutes later to find Pikachu and Ash on the couch talking.  Ash could now understand Pikachu and the two were closer than ever.  Oak walked in behind Misty and spoke in a serious tone.  "I think it's best we get to my lab and run some tests on Ash and Misty." he said.  Delia, who was now conscious, nodded.  They all headed over to the lab.
A while later, Oak had the results from the tests in his hand.  "I'm sorry Ash, Misty, but the transformation was completely natural, there's no hope of ever making you human again." he reported sadly.  "Great, now I'm stuck as a Raichu…" Ash said.  "One more thing." Oak added, "Raichu are NOT house Pokémon; you and Misty should live outdoors. Either you can go live in the forest, or you can live in the enclosed forest behind my lab." Oak said.
"I'll go with the enclosed forest; I don't want to risk being caught." Ash said.  Misty nodded.  "Alright, you two should go get settled there, it's where you'll be living from now on. Delia and I may visit occasionally, but for the most part you're on your own."  "Pikapi CHU!" Pikachu said.  "We're not completely alone Professor, we have Pikachu!" Ash said, giving his best friend a hug.  "Good for you, he'll be a big help getting you two adjusted to forest life." Oak said.  With that, Ash, Misty and Pikachu headed off to make new homes.
Years later, Ash and Misty are a mated Raichu couple, and have three boys.  The boys' Uncle, Pikachu, lives with them.  Oak and Delia visit occasionally to say hi or celebrate a holiday.  For the most part, they're all living Happily Ever After.  (I know it's corny…)
This is a commission that XGblue made for me.

Ash and Misty turn into Raichu's and then live together in the wild.
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Hey :iconzohaku:, if you have a request or commission for a story, just come to me! I usally don't get requests that much, but sometimes I do. You'll have to wait though, I'll already got to finish a short story series and then work on anoher person's request before I'm able to do yours. As long as you don't request or commission me for Digimon, your practically alright with requeting or commissioning whatever you like. Prices of Litature commissions are still being discussed with the rest of the Y.M.C.A._Gamers. Right now, we're voting on $1.00 a page, or $10.00 for a whole story. Right now, the vote is 7-3 in favor of $1.00 a page but there's still 10 votes left before I can cast mine in the case of a tie breaker and I don't know how the other 10 votes are going to go. My vote is simple enough: $10.00 for a whole story, but I can't cast it until the other 10 peopel who haven't voted vote and I haven't heard back from them since yesterday. I'll be checking my e-mail today though, so don't worry, I will know who has voted on which one by today at 8:00 P.M.